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  1. Good use of quotations to help develop your use of evidence Sasha. Remember to use quotation marks (‘insert quote here’) to differentiate what is from the text and what is your own work.

    Now try and explore different effects Shrike may have on the reader in order to analyse his effectiveness. What image does he create for the reader?

  2. Make sure you read your feedback Sacha and lets get your other 3 paragraphs written ASAP.

  3. Try and split your essay up into paragraphs based on different ideas. You need to develop the structure of your essay.

    Paragraphs are integral to all writing.

  4. We still need to include quotes from the book in order to achieve any of the badges Sacha. This is essential.

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